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PostSubject: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Mon Feb 25, 2013 10:10 pm

Title: The one who gathers light

When I saw you for the fisrst time,
you were an innocent child
But you turned on the ice
jumped brilliantly and successfully
have gathered lots of joyful voice
and won the applaude of the audience

Classical and pop music
Ballet
Everything was in a harmony
It seemed that it had guided your skating

After being in twenties
you have been attractive as a woman
I have been a fan of you more and more
Your expression have been deeper
You have improved figure skating as an composite art

Whenever you skate
Light cames on the ice
Your smile spreads the same simle on people Smile
When you skate
Everyone is going to be one
and wants to cheer you up

That is because you are the special one who gathers light

As the moonlight Smile
You shine people tenderly
And graciously


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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Tue Feb 26, 2013 9:20 pm

I'm sorry Embarassed I rewrite a little bit. Please join and I'm looking forward to your poems.

Title: The one who gathers light

When I saw you for the first time,
you were an innocent child
But you turned on the ice,
jumped brilliantly and successfully,
and have gathered lots of joyful voice,
won the applause of the audience

Classical and pop music
Ballet
Everything was in a harmony
It seemed that it had guided your skating

After being in twenties
you have been more attractive
I have been crazy about you
Your expression has been deeper
You have improved figure skating as an composite art

Whenever you skate
Light comes on the ice
Your smile spreads the same one on people
When you skate
Everyone is going to be one
and wants to cheer you up

That is because you are the special one who gathers light

As the moonlight
You shine people tenderly
And graciously
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Sat Mar 09, 2013 12:59 am

Me, again Embarassed But this time, I'd like to introduce my son's poem to you Wink
I have been waiting for your poems cheers

The Ice by blueboots1997

I remember Mao Asada
Especially, the performance she danced with other skaters on the ice
Still now, I don’t forget them dancing together

Jeffery Battle was interesting like Toron actor
Qing Pang and Jian Tong’s Liebestraum
Alissa Czisny’s Moon River

Their performance will be in everyone’s heart
For ten years, a hundred year, ten thousand years
Even now, the words
“Power to the people” is in my heart

Next year, again,
Let’s enjoy dancing and singing

Last year
In Aomori
They danced on “The Ice”
At that time
I think they smiled

Next year
If it is on in Osaka,
I’d like to see
The Ice
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Sun May 12, 2013 8:44 am


Me, again....... "A flower on the ice"

On the ice
You bend deeply and
Pick up flowers with other flower girls

After a long day
Despite the hard wall
You overcome and smile

This is your hope
Your mother’s
And ours

Please never give up
Heaven knows
Who is the one

In my heart
There is a flower
Still now

It will never die
The flower is real
You are the only one
Can achieve such a thing

I really hope
You are not leaving so soon
Your skating is everything

Your life
Beauty
And smile

There has been a flower since I saw you
On the ice
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Sat Jun 22, 2013 7:35 am

Mao’s new ex’s title is smile.  I remember my good time.  So, I will make a new poem.

I hope somebody will make poems about Mao’s new programs etc…in the near future.Smile

 

smile

 

I used to write letters to you

At that time,

There was no mail

At home

No computer

And cellular phone

 

I started corresponding with you

It was about more than 30 years ago

My letters from here

Your letters from different places

Indonesia

The Middle East

A post card from the Nile

Australia

 

It was my treasure to receive your letters

We talked about life in different cultures

Through letters each other

 

On Christmas Day

You called me and sang

“Stand by me” with your band

On the phone

 

A long time ago

But it still shines in my heart

I can remember clearly your letters

On the back of your letter

Only one word

smile!
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Sat Jun 22, 2013 6:51 pm

Hmmm.... Escape

The first year: dynamic sprite

Next few years: angelic beauty

But then came despair

Hopelessness

Reinvention

But at the cost of results

Death.


But with every tragedy, comes the ability to rise above it.


And you did


Now let's smile
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Sun Jun 23, 2013 6:51 am

:cheers:Hi, l-spiralmao;
I was moved to read your poem.  Thank you very much for your quick reply.
I felt lonely.  But now with your poem, I feel more confident about sharing poems.

When you are tired of too many words, information, or, if you want to take a break...
Reading or writing poems
will make your day better.

Yes, there was no title of your poem... maybe, escape?  If it is so,  I want to escape, too.
Your poem is short but deep.
I like the following parts

"But then came despair"

"But with every tragedy, comes the ability to rise above it"

In this case, it is "Death2, isn't it?
I understand it means bad luck or something terrible.

The last part
"Now let's smile" sounds really soft
just like Mao's smile.Encore
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Sun Jun 23, 2013 12:00 pm

whiteboots2013 wrote:
:cheers:Hi, l-spiralmao;
I was moved to read your poem.  Thank you very much for your quick reply.
I felt lonely.  But now with your poem, I feel more confident about sharing poems.

When you are tired of too many words, information, or, if you want to take a break...
Reading or writing poems
will make your day better.

Yes, there was no title of your poem... maybe, escape?  If it is so,  I want to escape, too.
Your poem is short but deep.
I like the following parts

"But then came despair"

"But with every tragedy, comes the ability to rise above it"

In this case, it is "Death2, isn't it?
I understand it means bad luck or something terrible.

The last part
"Now let's smile" sounds really soft
just like Mao's smile.Encore

Thanks... 

The poem is actually a short summary of Mao's senior career...

From jumping dynamo (2005-2006) to a delicate and airy sprite (2006-2009) to Bells of Moscow, jump technique changes, death of mother, (supposed) death of career (2009-2012), to the current Mao we all know and love.
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Tue Jul 02, 2013 7:20 am

I made a new poem about love with thinking of the music of Mao’s new sp.

First love

Suddenly
You appeared
In front of me
Like a dream

In my dream
You came to me
And touched me softly
I couldn’t move

After I saw the dream,
I felt you closer
It was funny
But interesting

I couldn’t imagine my feeling
Without thinking anything deeply
My first love came to me
It was the beginning of our story

Day by day
I came to know you
You called me every night
It was nice to listen to your voice

I really like your voice
It hasn’t changed since I met you for the first time
And your smile
Forever

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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Sat Sep 14, 2013 5:29 am

Hi, Mao fans; this space is wide open. Please enjoy and compose your poems about Mao chan.



The reason why I like you

Lots of pressure
Unreasonable criticism

Under these circumstances
It is good to have a finish line

To live your true life
To find your true love

You have been giving us
Lots of beautiful things
Uncountable encouragement

Last year
I had a terrible time
But thanks for your performance and existence
I could keep going

Even though you retire, your spirit and art will be followed by others
It means you will be in your followers

Graceful
Spiritual

You will inspire
And encourage people
who suffer from their difficulties
with smile
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Sat Sep 14, 2013 6:20 pm

Whiteboots2013, those are lovely poems. Wish I can write one but I've always been bad at it even in school.

Do you mind, though, if I include one or two in the photobook (with your name, of course)?
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Sat Sep 14, 2013 10:17 pm

roma, thanks for your comments.
I'm willing to:flower: 
You can select from here and please include them in it. I'd love to do it.

roma,
Please join and express yourself as your poems:sunny: someday.
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Fri Oct 04, 2013 6:14 am

Tomorrow

I read an article about you this morning
My son told me about it yesterday
I read aloud
I found the truth
You started skating when you were five
You have never skipped any season
I was so surprised

Tonight I saw you on youtube
You look confident
Full of energy

I realized
You can make it
Everything seems to be clear
For you

You are ready for it

I pray for your skating
I just pray
For it

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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Fri Nov 29, 2013 4:25 am

Mao season

This season of the year is coming
On the snowy ice
You will describe your emotion
Your love and your truth

Silver and white lines

Pure and perpetual movements

Sometimes soft
Sometimes strong

Your way of skating
So beautiful
Beyond description

Happy holidays are coming soon
The air is
Cold and clean
I like this season

Your real stage is coming in a few months
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Wed Jan 01, 2014 5:56 am

I don’t want you to feel too much pressure flower 


We are not perfect
Especially trying higher skills on the ice
Nobody knows what will happen next
I had never seen any competitions before
Afraid to see their falls or mistakes
So I only enjoyed the shows peacefully
But when Mao made the decision
I changed and have become stronger
Enough to see the competitions directly

To be one of her fans is so honorable
To be there with her
Along the rink side
To call her name in a small voice

I want Mao to feel happiness to skate
After her each performance
During the rest of the coming season
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Wed Jan 01, 2014 7:38 am

If only I was this intellectually creative hahaha  Laughing  Your poems are stunning to read whiteboots2013. I hope I'll be able to make some poems when I have the time.

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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Wed Jan 01, 2014 8:01 am

Thank you, ilovethai...i also enjoy your comments.  Sometimes funny.  I like your sense of humor and i always feel your love towards Mao between lines.  Your Mao's picture looks so good and full of confidence.  Yes.  Like chatting, you can make your poems.  So, please try it.  I'm looking forward to it. Smile Encore
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Sun Jan 05, 2014 1:54 am

I’d like to see you longer

When I see you on the ice
Your way of skating
Your expression how you feel
I just can’t stop watching you

I want to see your performance everyday
As far as I have enough time
Or the nights when I can’t sleep

The sound when you skate
The ice is like singing lovely songs
Softly and lovely

Even though when you fight on the ice
I feel comfortable

I know you
I have been a fan of you for a long time

Just like favorite music
I need your performance everyday
To live in this world in a better way
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Sat Feb 01, 2014 12:50 am

Miracle

My dream is to see
A smile which can melt frozen hearts
On the ice
Awakening
Softly
According to the melody
Dramatically
And at last

It is in a week
Silently

Stars are shining in your
Peaceful mind
Every time
Calm down
I
Am always with you
Like a miracle
.
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Wed Feb 19, 2014 1:56 pm

Tomorrow

Will be another day

I was shocked yesterday
But don’t worry
You don’t need to worry about anything

Always
You have been overcome such difficulties
We believe in you

We are not so strong
But believe me
You are the real beauty

Nobody can judge your talent
What a pity
We also know your effort

I saw your perfomance directly three times last year
I have never seen such a beautiful lady in my life

Oh, God
Please give us hope
Once again
I’ d like to tell you

Nobody is perfect
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Wed Feb 19, 2014 3:47 pm

Bawling  It's beautiful, but how I wish the events would've turned out differently tonight, and you'd be composing poem about Mao winning instead of this.

But as always, it's very beautiful. You are very talented.
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Thu Feb 20, 2014 5:10 am

whiteboots2013, it's so beautiful. Tank you so much. I can't help my tears.  Depressed Crying 
Hope tonight Mao will feel all the supports sent by people around the world.
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Thu Feb 20, 2014 6:35 am

Thank you, zarinaballerina and linglang: I have been happy a little after reading your comments. Smile Smile  Thanks for Mao, I can explain my thoughts with other people. It is great to face such encouraging people. With friends and co-workers, I could talk about Mao almost all day long. And it is still not enough. Suprisingly, so many people think about Mao. It is increadible. And no one around me said negative things. One of the co-workers put tiny flowers on the desk to heal my feeling. It may be a tiny thing, but cheered me up very well. Sorry, this is not a poem.
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Tue Apr 08, 2014 9:11 pm

Spring has come

Under the cherry blossoms
We walked side by side
You said to me
I was so happy to come here
And be able to see Mao and other skaters

I felt the same

After the competition
At station
There were so many people filled with the space
You guided me in waves of people
Everyone walked so slowly
Carefully

The night we could share the performance
I couldn’t find any words except it was great.

At hotel
We talked how beautiful it was
Talked about many things
Sometimes crying and smiling
I could find a friend to share
Things wonderful in life

Just like
Mao said
“Skating is wonderful”
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PostSubject: Re: Let's enjoy composing poems about Mao!   Tue Apr 08, 2014 9:34 pm

aww.. love that you put Mao's quote in there, in your personal journey of Worlds 2014
lovely poem, thanks for posting it!!
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